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ration dramatic, and have an air of truth, by making things appear as passing in our sight. But such repetitions are unpardonable in a didactic poem. In one of Hesiod's poems of that kind, a long passage occurs twice in the same chapter.

A concise comprehensive style is a great ornament in narration; and superfluity of unnecessary words, no less than of circumstances, a great nuisance. A judicious selection of the striking circumstances, clothed in a nervous style, is delightful. In this style. Tacitus excels all writers ancient and modern. Instances are numberless take the following specimen :

Crebra hinc prælia, et sæpius in modum latrochinii: per saltus, per paludes; ut cuique fors aut virtus: temere, proviso, ob iram, ob prædam, jussa, et aliquando ignaris ducibus.-Annal. lib. 12. § 39.

After Tacitus, Ossian in that respect justly merits the place of distinction. One cannot go wrong for examples in any part of the book; and at the first opening the following instance meets the eye :

Nathos clothed his limbs in shining steel. The stride of the chief is lovely: the joy of his eye terrible. The wind rustles in his hair. Darthula is silent at his side her look is fixed on the chief. Striving to hide the rising sigh, two tears swell in her eye.

I add one other instance, which, beside the property under consideration, raises delicately our most tender sympathy.

Son of Fingal! dost thou not behold the darkness of Crothar's hall of shells? My soul was not dark at the feast, when my people lived. I rejoiced in the pre sence of strangers, when my son shone in the hall. But Ossian, he is a beam that is departed, and left no streak of light behind. He is fallen, son of Fingal, in the battles of his father.Rothmar, the chief of grassy Tromlo, heard that my eyes had failed; he heard that my arms were fixed in the hall, and the pride of his soul arose, He came towards Croma: my people fell before him. I took my arms in the hall, but what could sightless Crothar do? My steps were unequal; my grief was great. I wished for the days that were past: days! wherein I fought, and won in the field of blood. My son returned from the chase; the fair. haired Fovar-gormo. He had not lifted his sword in battle, for his arm was young. But the soul of the youth was great; the fire of valour burnt in his eye. He saw the disordered steps of his father, and his sigh arose. King of Croma, he said, is it because thou hast no son? is it for the weakness of Fovar-gormo's arm that thy sighs arise? I begin, my father, to feel the strength of my arm; I have drawn the sword of my youth, and I have bent the bow. Let me meet this Rothmar, with the youths of Croma; let me meet him, O my father, for [ feel my burning soul.

And thou shalt meet him, I said, son of the sightless Crothar! But let others advance before thee, that I may hear the tread of thy feet at thy return; for my eyes behold thee not, fair-haired Fovar-gormo!- -He went: he met the foe, he fell. The foe advances towards Croma. He who slew my son is near, with all his pointed spears.

If a concise or nervous style be a beauty, tautology must be a blemish and yet writers, fettered by verse, are not sufficiently careful to avoid this slovenly practice; they may be pitied, but they cannot be justified. Take for a specimen the following instances, from the best poet, for versification at least, that England has to boast of.

High on his helm celestial lightnings play,
His beamy shield emits a living ray,

Th' unwearied blaze incessant streams supplies,
Like the red star that fires the autumnal skies.-Iliad, v. 5.
Strength and omnipotence invest thy throne.-Ibid. viii. 578,
So silent fountains, from a rock's tall head,

In sable streams soft trickling waters shed.-Ibid. ix. 19.
His clanging armour rung.—Ibid. xii. 94.

Fear on their cheek, and horror in their eye.-Ibid. xv. 4.
The blaze of armour flash'd against the day.-Ibid. xvii. 736.
As when the piercing blasts of Boreas blow.-Ibid. xix. 380.
And like the moon, the broad refulgent shield

Blaz'd with long rays, and gleam'd athwart the field.—Ibid. xix. 402.
No-could our swiftness o'er the winds prevail,

Or beat the pinions of the western gale,

All were in vain,loid. xix. 460.

The humid sweat from ev'ry pore descends.-Ibid. xxiii. 829.

Redundant epithets, such as humid in the last citation, are by Quintilian disallowed to orators; but indulged to poets,* because his favourite poets, in a few instances, are reduced to such epithets for the sake of versification: for instance, Prata canis albicant pruinis of Horace, and liquidos fontes of Virgil.

As an apology for such careless expressions, it may well suffice, that Pope, in submitting to be a translator, acts below his genius. In a translation, it is hard to require the same spirit of accuracy, that is cheerfully bestowed on an original work. And to support the reputation of that author, I shall give some instances from Virgil and Horace, more faulty by redundancy than any of those above mentioned:

Sæpe etiam immensum cœlo venit agmen aquarum,
Et fædam glomerant tempestatem imbribus atris
Collectæ ex alto nubes: ruit arduus æther,

Et pluvià ingenti sata laeta, boumque labores
Diluit.-Georg. lib. i. 322.

Postquam altum tenuere rates, nec jam amplius ullae

Apparent terrae; cœlum undique et undique pontus:

Tum mihi coeruleus supra caput astitit imber,

Noctem hyememque ferens: et inhorruit unda tenebris.-neid, lib. iii. 192.

-Hinc tibi copia

Manabit ad plenum benigno

Ruris honorum opulenta cornu.-Horat. Carm. lib. 1. ode 17.
Videre fessos vomerem inversum boves

Collo trahentes languido.-Horat. epod. ii. 63.

Here I can luckily apply Horace's rule against himself:

Est brevitate opus, ut currat sententia, neu se

Impediat verbis lassas onerantibus aures.-Satir. lib. 1. sat. x. 9.

I close this chapter with a curious inquiry. An object, however ugly to the sight, is far from being so when represented by colours or by words. What is the cause of this difference? With respect to painting, the cause is obvious: a good picture, whatever the subject be, is agreeable by the pleasure we take in imitation; and *L. 7. chap. 6. sect. 27

this pleasure, overbalancing the disagreeableness of the subject makes the picture upon the whole agreeable. With respect to the description of an ugly object, the cause follows. To connect individuals in the social state, no particular contributes more than language, by the power it possesses of an expeditious communication of thought, and a lively representation of transactions. But nature hath not been satisfied to recommend language by its utility merely; independent of utility, it is made susceptible of many beauties, which are directly felt, without any intervening reflection.* And this unfolds the mystery; for the pleasure of language is so great, as in a lively description to overbalance the disagreeablenessof the image raised by it. This, however, is no encouragement to choose a disagreeable subject; for the pleasure is incomparably greater where the subject and the description are both of them agreeable.

The following description is upon the whole agreeable, though the subject described is in itself dismal :

Nine times the space that measures day and night
To mortal men, he with his horrid crew

Lay vanquish'd, rolling in the fiery gulf,
Confounded though immortal! but his doom
Reserv'd him to more wrath; for now the though*
Both of lost happiness and lasting pain

Torments him; round he throws his baleful eyes
That witness'd huge affliction and dismay,
Mix'd with obdurate pride and steadfast hate:

At once as far as angels ken he views

The dismal situation waste and wild:

A dungeon horrible, on all sides round

As one great furnace flam'd; yet from those flames
No light, but rather darkness visible

Serv'd only to discover sights of woe,

Regions of sorrow, doleful shades, where peace

And rest can never dwell, hope never comes

That comes to all; but torture without end

Still urges, and a fiery deluge, fed

With ever-burning sulphur unconsum'd!

Such place eternal Justice hath prepar'd

For those rebellious.-Paradise Lost, book 1. l. 50.

An unmanly depression of spirits in time of danger is not a agreeable sight; and yet a fine description or representation of it will be relished:

K. Richard. What must the King do now ? must he submit?
The King shall do it: must he be depos'd?
The King shall be contented: must he lose
The name of King? i' God's name, let it go;
I'll give my jewels for a set of beads;
My gorgeous palace for an hermitage;
My gay apparel for an almsman's gown;
My figur'd goblets for a dish of wood;
My sceptre for a palmer's walking staff;
My subjects for a pair of carved saints;
And my large kingdom for a little grave;
A little, little grave ;-
-an obscure grave.
Or, I'll be buried in the King's highway;
Some way of common tread, where subjects' feet

*See chap. 18.

+ See chap. 2. part 4:

May hourly trample on their sovereign's head;

For on my heart they tread now, whilst I live;

And, buried once, why not upon my head ?-Richard II. act 3. sc. 6. Objects that strike terror in a spectator have in poetry and painting a fine effect. The picture, by raising a slight emotion of terror, agitates the mind; and in that condition every beauty makes a deep impression. May not contrast heighten the pleasure, by opposing our present security to the danger of encountering the object represented?

-The other shape,

If shape it might be call'd, that shape had none
Distinguishable in member, joint, or limb;

Or substance might be call'd that shadow seem'd,
For each seem'd either; black it stood as night,
Fierce as ten furies, terrible as hell,

And shook a dreadful dart.-Paradise Lost, book 2. l, 666.

-Now storming fury rose,

And clamour such as heard in heaven till now
Was never: arms on armour clashing bray'd
Horrible discord, and the madding wheels
Of brazen chariots rag'd; dire was the noise
Of conflict: overhead the dismal hiss
Of fiery darts in flaming vollies flew,
And flying vaulted either host with fire.
So under fiery cope together rush'd
Both battles main, with ruinous assault

And inextinguishable rage: all heaven

Resounded; and had earth been then, all earth

Had to her centre shook.-Paridise Lost, book 6. l. 207.

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To tell the secrets of my prison-house,

I could a tale unfold, whose lightest word

Would harrow up thy soul, freeze thy young blood,

Make thy two eyes, like stars, start from their spheres,

Thy knotty and combined locks to part,

And each particular hair to stand on end,

Like quills upon the fretful porcupine:

But this eternal blazon must not be

To ears of flesh and blood.-Hamlet, act 1. sc. 8.

Gratiano. Poor Desdemona! I'm glad thy father's dead:

Thy match was mortal to him; and pure grief

Shore his old thread in twain. Did he live now,

This sight would make him do a desperate turn :
Yea, curse his better angel from his side,
And fall to reprobation.-Othello, act 5. sc. 8.

Objects of horror must be excepted from the foregoing theory; for no description, however lively, is sufficient to overbalance the disgust raised even by the idea of such objects. Every thing hor rible ought therefore to be avoided in a description. Nor is this a severe law the poet will avoid such scenes for his own sake, as well as for that of his reader; and to vary his descriptions, nature affords plenty of objects that disgust us in some degree without raising horror. I am obliged, therefore, to condemn the picture of Sin in the second book of Paradise Lost, though a masterly per

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formance: the original would be a horrid spectacle: and the horre is not much softened in the copy:

-Pensive here I sat

Alone; but long I sat not, till my womb,
Pregnant by thee, and now excessive grown,
Prodigious motion felt and rueful throes.
At last this odious offspring whom thou seest,
Thine own begotten, breaking violent way,
Tore through my entrails, that with fear and pain
Distorted, all my nether shape thus grew
Transform'd; but he my inbred enemy
Forth issu'd, brandishing his fatal dart,
Made to destroy: I fled, and cry'd out Death;
Hell trembled at the hideous name, and sigh'd
From all ber caves, and back resounded Death.
I fled; but he pursu'd (though more, it seems,
Inflam'd with lust than rage), and swifter far,
Me overtook, his mother, all dismay'd,
And in embraces forcible and foul
Engend'ring with me, of that rape begot
These yelling monsters that with ceaseless cry
Surround me, as thou saw'st, hourly conceiv'd
And hourly born, with sorrow infinite
To me; for when they list, into the womb
That bred them they return, and howl and gnaw
My bowels, their repast; then bursting forth,
Afresh with conscious terrors vex me round,
That rest or intermission none I find.
Before mine eyes in opposition sits

Grim Death, my son and foe, who sets them on.
And me his parent would full soon devour
For want of other prey, but that he knows
His end with mine involv'd; and knows that I
Should prove a bitter morsel, and his bane,
Whenever that shall be.-Book 2. l. 777.

Iago's character in the tragedy of Othello is insufferably monstrous and Satanical: not even Shakspeare's masterly hand can make the picture agreeable.

Though the objects introduced in the following scenes are not altogether so horrible as Sin is in Milton's description; yet with every person of delicacy, disgust will be the prevailing emotion:

-Strophades Graïo stant nomine dictae

Insulae Ionio in magno: quas dira Celaeno,
Harpyiaeque colunt aliae: Phineïa postquam
Clausa domus, mensasque metu liquere priores.
'Tristius haud illis monstrum, nec saevior ulla
Pestis et ira Deûm Stygiis sese extulit undis.
Virginei volucrum vultus, fœdissima ventris
Proluvies, uncaeque manus, et pallida semper
Ora fame.

Huc ubi delati portus intravimus: ecce

Laeta boum passim campis armenta videmus,
Caprigenumque pecus, nullo custode, per herbas.
Irruimus ferro, at Divos ipsumque vocamus
In praedam partemque Jovem : tunc littore curvo
Extruimusque toros, dapibusque epulamur opimis.
At subitae horrifico lapsu de montibus adsunt
Harpyiae: et magnis quatiunt clangoribus alas:

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