There are two peculiarities in Homer's diction which are a fort of marks, or moles, by which every common eye diftinguishes him at first sight: those who are not his greatest admirers look upon them as defects, and those who are seem pleased with them as beauties. I speak of his compound epithets, and of his repetitions. Many of the former cannot be done literally into English without destroying the purity of our language. I believe such should be retained as slide easily of themselves into an English compound, without violence to the ear or to the received rules of composition; as well as those which have received a sanction from the authority of our best poets, and are become familiar through their use of them; such as the cloud-compelling Jove, &c. As for the reft, whenever any can be as fully and significantly expreft in a fingle word as in a compound one, the course to be taken is obvious. Some that cannot be so turned as to preferve their full image by one or two words, may have justice done them by circumlocution; as the epithet εἶνοσίφυλλος to a mountain, would appear little or ridiculous translated literally "leaf-shaking," but affords a majeftic idea in the periphralis: "The lofty mountain shakes his waving woods." Others that admit of differing fignifications, may receive an advantage by a judicious variation according to the occafions on which they are introduced. For example, the epithet of Apollo, ἑκηβόλος, or " far-shooting" is capable of two explications; one literal, in respect to the darts and bow, the ensigns of that God; the other allegorical, with regard to the rays of the fun therefore, in such places where Apollo is represented as a God in person, I would use the former interpretation; and where the effects of the fun are defcribed, I would make choice of the latter. Upon the whole, it will be necefsary to avoid that perpetual repetition of the fame epithets which we find in Homer; and which, though it might be accommodated (as has been already shewn) to the ear of those times, is by no means so to ours: but one may wait for opportunities of placing them, where they derive an additional beauty from the occafions on which they are employed; and in doing this properly, a tranflator may at once shew his fancy and his judgment. a As for Homer's repetitions, we may divide them into three forts; of whole narrations and speeches, of single fentences, and of one verse or hemiftich. I hope it is not impossible to have such a regard to these, as neither to lose so known a mark of the Author on the one hand, nor to offend the reader too much on the other. The repetition is not ungraceful in those speeches where the dignity of the speaker renders it fort of infolence to alter his words; as in the messages from Gods to men, or from higher powers to inferiors in concerns of state, or where the ceremonial of religion seems to require it, in the folemn forms of prayers, oaths, or the like. In other cafes, I believe, the best rule is, to be guided by the nearness, or distance, at which the repetitions are placed in the original: when they follow too close, one may vary the expression; but it is a question whether a profefsed tranflator be authorised to omit any: if they be tedious, the author is to anfwer for it. It only remains to speak of the versification. Homer (as has been said) is perpetually applying the found to the sense, and varying it on every new subject. This is indeed one of the most exquifite beauties of poetry, and attainable by very few: I know only of Homer eminent for it in the Greek, and Virgil in Latin. I am sensible it is what may fometimes happen by chance, when a writer is warm, and fully possest of his image: however it may be reasonably believed they designed this, in whose verse it so manifeftly appears in a fuperior degree to all others. Few readers have the ear to be judges of it; but those who have, will fee I have endeavoured at this beauty. Upon the whole I must confefs myself utterly incapable of doing justice to Homer. I attempt him in no other hope but that which one may entertain without much vanity, of giving a more tolerable copy of him than any entire tranflation in verse has yet done. We have only those of Chapman, Hobbes, and Ogilby. Chapman has taken the advantage of an immeasurable length of verse, notwithstanding which, there is scarce any paraphrafe more loose and rambling than his. He has frequently interpolations of i four or fix lines, and I remember one in the thirteenth book of the Odyffes, ver. 312. where he has spun twenty verses out of two. He is often mistaken in so bold a manner, that one may think he deviated on purpose, if he did not in other places of his notes infift so much upon verbal trifles. He appears to have had a strong affectation of extracting new meanings out of his author, infomuch as to promise, in his rhyming preface, a poem of the mysteries he had revealed in Homer: and perhaps he endeavoured to ftrain the obvious sense to this end. His expression is involved in fustian, a fault for which he was remarkable in his original writings, as in the tragedy of Buffy d'Amboise, &c. In a word, the nature of the man may account for his whole performance; for he appears from his preface and remarks to have been of an arrogant turn, and an enthusiast in poetry. His own boast of having finished half the Iliad in less than fifteen weeks, shews with what negligence his verfion was performed. that which is to be allowed him, and which very much contributed to cover *his defects, is a daring fiery spirit that animates his tranflation, which is something like what one might imagine Homer himself would have writ before he arrived at years of difcretion. But Hobbes has given us a correct explanation of the sense in general; but for particulars and circumstances he continually lops them, and often omits the most beautiful. As for its being esteemed a close tranflation, I doubt not many have been led into that error by the shortness of it, which proceeds not from his following the original line by line, but from the contracions abovementioned. He sometimes omits whole fimilies and fentences, and is now and then guilty of mistakes, into which no writer of his learning could have fallen, but through carelessness. His poetry, as well as Ogilby's, is too mean for criticism. It is a great loss to the poetical world that Mr. Dryden did not live to tranflate the Iliad. He has left us only the first book, and a small part of the fixth; in which if he has in some places not truly interpreted the sense, or preferved the antiquities, it ought to be excused on account of the hafte he was obliged to write in.. He seems to have had too much regard to Chapman, whose words he sometimes copies, and has unhappily followed him in passages where he wanders from the original. However, had he translated the whole work, I would no more have attempted Homer after him than Virgil, his version of whom (notwithstanding some human errors) is the most noble and spirited tranflation 1 know in any language. But the fate of great geniuses is like that of great minifters: though they are confessedly the first in the common-wealth of letters, they must be envied and calumniated only for being at the head of it. That which in my opinion ought to be the endeavour of any one who translates Homer, is above all things to keep alive that spirit and fire which makes his chief character: in particular places, where the sense can bear any doubt, to follow the strongest and most poetical, as most agreeing with that character; to copy him in all the variations of his style, and the different modulations of his numbers; to preserve, in the more active or defcriptive parts, a warmth and elevation; in the more fedate or narrative, a plainness and folemnity; in the speeches, a fullness and perfpicuity; in the fentences, a shortness and gravity: not to neglect even the little figures and turns on the words, nor fometimes the very cast of the periods; neither to omit nor confound any rites or customs of antiquity; perhaps too he ought to include the whole in a shorter compass, than has hitherto been done by any translator who has tolerably preferved either the sense or poetry. What I would farther recommend to him, is to study his author rather from his own text, than from any commentaries, how learned loever, or whatever figure they may make in the estimation of the world; to confider him attentively in comparison with Virgil above all the ancients, and with Milton above all the moderns. Next these, the archbishop of Cambray's Telemachus may give him the trueft idea of the spirit and turn of our author, and B2 1 1 1 Bosiu's admirable treatise of the Epic poem the justest notion of his design and conduct. But after all, with whatever judgment and study a man may proceed, or with whatever happiness he may perform fuch a work, he must hope to please but a few: those only who have at once a taste of poetry, and competent learning. For to fatisfy such as want either, is not in the nature of this undertaking, since a mere modern wit can like nothing that is not modern, and a pedant nothing that is not Greek. What I have done is submitted to the Publick, from whose opinions I am prepared to learn; though I fear no judges so little as our best poets, who are most sensible of the weight of this task. As for the worst, whatever they shall please to say, they may give me fome concern as they are unhappy men, but none as they are malignant writers. I was guided in this tranflation by judgments very different from theirs, and by persons for whom they can have no kindness, if an old observation be true, that the strongest antipathy in the world is that of fools to men of wit. Mr. Addison was the first whose advice determined me to undertake this task, who was pleased to write to me upon that occafion in such terms as I cannot repeat without vanity. I was obliged to Sir Richard Steele for a very early recommendation of my undertaking to the publick. Dr. Swift promoted my interest with that warmth with which he always ferves his friend. The humanity and frankness of Sir Samuel Garth are what I never knew wanting on any occafion. I must also acknowledge, with infinite pleasure, the many friendly offices, as well as fincere criticisms of Mr. Congreve, who had led me the way in translating some parts of Homer; as I wish for the fake of the world he had prevented me the rest. I must add the names of Mr. Rowe and Dr. Parnell, though I shall take a further opportunity of doing justice to the last, whose good-nature (to give it a great panegyrick) is no less extenfive than his learning. The favour of these gentlemen is not entirely undeserved by one who bears them so true an affection. But what can I say of the honour fo many of the Great have done me, while the first names of the age appear as my subscribers, and the most distinguished patrons and ornaments of learning as my chief encouragers? Among these it is a particular pleasure to me to find, that my highest.obligations are to fuch who have done most honour to the name of poet; that his grace the duke of Buckingham was not displeased I should undertake the author to whom he has given (in his excellent Essay) so complete a praise. "Read Homer once, and you can read no more ; That the earl of Halifax was one of the first to favour me, of whom it is hard to ay I could fay a great deal of the pleasure of being distinguished by the earl of Carnarvon: but it is almost absurd to particularize any one generous action in a person whose whole life is a continued series of them. Mr. Stanhope, the present secretary of state, will pardon my defire of having it known that he was pleased to promote this affair. The particular zeal of Mr. Harcourt (the son of the late lord chancellor) gave me a proof how much I am honoured in a share of his friendship. I must attribute to the fame motive that of several others of my friends, to whom all acknowledgments are rendered unneceffary by the privileges of a familiar correspondence: and I am satisfied I can no way better oblige men of their turn, than by my filence. In short, I have found more patrons than ever Homer wanted. He would have thought himself happy to have met the fame favour at Athens, that has been shewn me by its learned rival, the university of Oxford. If my author had the Wits of after ages for his defenders, his tranflator has had the Beauties of the present for his advocates; a pleasure too great to be changed for any fame in reversion. And I can hardly envy him those pompous honours he received after death, when I reflect on the enjoyment of fo many agreeable obligations, and easy friendships, which make the fatisfaction of life. This diftinction is the more to be acknowledged, as it is shewn to one whose pen has never gratified the prejudices of particular parties, or the vanities of particular men. Whatever the success may prove, I shall never repent of an undertaking in which I have experienced the candour and friendship of so many persons of merit; and in which I hope to pass some of those years of youth that are generally lost in a circle of follies, after a manner, neither wholly unuseful to others, nor disagreeable to myself. 1 THE |